‘Moon Over’ Alert: Love and tears

James Finn
2 min readMar 5, 2020

Ian and Dima face the anguish of parting — each in his own way.

Meanwhile, Dima’s Soviet-general father is on the move, much closer than they believe. Life is not a fairytale, say Dima and his hard princess of an aunt.

Are they right?

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Author’s Notes:

I named General Borin in honor of one of my teachers, a Soviet naval officer defector. When I close my eyes and see Dima’s Aunt Svetlana, I remember Professor Borin’s regal wife. She was tall and stately, with a hard dignity about her that I imagined took root in a life of sadness and hardship.

She also taught in the Russian program I entered after college, but she was never my teacher, which pleased me. Her reputation was one of a demanding taskmaster who brooked no excuses. I did like her, though, in social settings. While she could be hard, she was very perceptive, never cruel, and always an excellent storyteller.

I may be adding chapters in the future to more fully treat the older generation in this novel. Svetlana and the personality I imagine for her will feature heavily if I do.

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James Finn
James Finn

Written by James Finn

James Finn is an LGBTQ columnist, a former Air Force intelligence analyst, an alumnus of Act Up NY, and an agented but unpublished novelist.

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