I was just telling Fred Shirley this morning that in the original (unserialized) manuscript, Raph tells David who’s locked in the basement before he opens the door.

But in my evil, cliffhanging ways, I had had to edit that line out. ;-) Bwahahahahaha!

I’ll probably add it back in for the Amazon version of the novel, because it doesn’t actually make a lot of sense for Raph not to tell him right then.

Jim

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