James Finn
1 min readJan 11, 2020

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I chopped this chapter in two for the purpose of serialization. Juliette being missing is overhyped as a cliffhanger, I’m afraid. My apologies! But it’s an almost unavoidable artifact of cutting the story up into online-size bites. Reading the chapter in one organic chunk, the next paragraph would rush along and the reader would likely feel no more than a slight mounting tension. But I do have a payoff coming. The tension builds to a climax that I hope is both exciting and funny. And which allows us to segue gracefully into the next chapter and the beginning of Act III.

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James Finn
James Finn

Written by James Finn

James Finn is an LGBTQ columnist, a former Air Force intelligence analyst, an alumnus of Act Up NY, and an agented but unpublished novelist.

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