James Finn
1 min readMay 20, 2020

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Fantastic story, Chandler. I loved the subtle allusion to A Separate Peace.

I loved that your character is struggling with teen angst not because he’s gay but because he’s a teen.

I loved the build of tension that got me invested and rooting for him.

Welcome to Prism & Pen. :-)

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James Finn
James Finn

Written by James Finn

James Finn is an LGBTQ columnist, a former Air Force intelligence analyst, an alumnus of Act Up NY, and an agented but unpublished novelist.

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